Double spread page drafts

For my double spread page I looked at several NME pages for inspiration, having a main body of text as well as my own original image on the left.

Draft 1

Draft 2

For this second version I have added a byline as well as a caption for the dominant image and the image itself has been slightly enlarged so that there is less dead space. I have also removed the black bars from the main body of text to make the double spread page appear more professional.